Dear, I'm terribly sorry,
For, I do not enjoy you being upset.
I do not wish to hurt your feelings
But, sometimes I know I say the wrong things,
Which typically lead to misunderstandings,
And fights, and arguments;
I'm not perfect but, I try my best.
I really do want you to be happy,
And I usually say what I mean,
But, for some reason I've become rather shy,
And seemingly unable to express
All the words I wish to say.
So, dear, I'll just tell you this:
I'll tell you that I really care,
And I appreciate you, and I'm thankful.
For, I do feel very lucky.
And, dear, I'm extremely happy,
For, you make me that way.
I wish to be with you ceaselessly,
Since I miss you when we're apart,
And, I wish to give you a hug,
And a kiss, and be thoroughly happy together,
And, most of all, just let you know...
...entirely how I feel.














Comments
I think you do a good job and describing, overall, how you felt; it's not overly flowerly, or gushing poetic, but more on the side of simplistic and heartfelt, or so it seems to me.
This is me being cynical, but on the line, "I do not enjoy you being upset", I thought to myself, but sometimes it is nice to know someone cares about you enough to let you have such an power over them, as to effect their mood.
It means a lot considering it's the first poem I ever let anyone else read, save school projects, etc.
First thing anyone ever read that has meaning behind it, I guess, too.
Yeah, and I guess you do have a valid point with your mood theory but, I'd still rather not have people I care for being upset, etc. ;(
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i needed to hear something that sounded like an answer...
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